Friday, June 5, 2020

"It's Only a Flesh Wound" - rhyming doggerel

Lawrence Hall
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poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

“It’s Only a Flesh Wound”

Gunsmoke Re-runs

Three times each morning that man in black
Swaggers High Noon-ish towards Marshal Dillon
The poor wretch shoots; Marshal Dillon shoots back
Three times each morning – so there ain’t no killin’

Thursday, June 4, 2020

Robert Frost: "I Had a Lover's Quarrel with the World" - weekly column

Lawrence Hall
Mhall46184@aol.com
Poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

“I Had a Lover’s Quarrel with the World”

Here along Beer Can Road and County Dump Extension y’r ‘umble scrivener has set himself to reading all of Robert Frost in a third-hand Library of America edition.

In school we all studied “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening,” “The Road not Taken,” “Fire and Ice,” “Nothing Gold Can Stay,” and other of Mr. Frost’s more familiar pieces, and they stay with us. They stay with us because they are good, both in form and in content.

Mr. Frost crafts smooth, flowing iambic tetrameter and iambic pentameter, usually rhyming but often not. That he makes rhyme work so well demonstrates the excellence of his art; there are only five – arguably six – vowel sounds in English, which rhymed through the pen or keyboard of a learner usually ends in clunkiness or unintended comedy.

Most modern poetry is free verse, which is not poetry at all but only prose lazily sorted out into artless broken lines. As Stephen Fry says in his foreword to The Ode Less Travelled, free verse is like a child who knows nothing about music simply beating on piano keys and calling it music.

As for content, Mr. Frost writes about everything except himself, thus sharing Creation with us. Most modern poetry is a closed loop of endless, self-pitying, self-referential loop, I, I, I, my, my, my me, me, me, poor me, nobody understands me.”

“But it’s from the heart” is no excuse for this sort of thing in any art.

One of my, my, my (appreciate the irony) recent discoveries is Mr. Frost’s “The Lesson for Today,” a speech given before Harvard’s Phi Beta Kappa Society in the summer of 1941. Mr. Frost gave his address in blank verse with the occasional end rhyme. That his presentation was in verse was not only appropriate for a professional poet but which could be, and often was, accomplished with some skill by the ordinary high school graduate whose curriculum was predicated upon civilization.

And then came Sputnik.

“The Lesson for Today” is a meditation on mortality, eternity, and purpose. Mr. Frost’s daughter died in 1934, his wife died in 1938, his son died in 1940. The Second World War had been going on in China since 1933 and in Europe since 1939. In “The Lesson for Today” Mr. Frost sometimes has a little fun, but the arc connects all these sorrows without directly mentioning them.

The speaker of the poem, perhaps Mr. Frost himself, has a dialogue with Alcuin of York, the Master of Charlemagne’s palace school, in order to “Seek converse common cause and brotherhood” in exploring life during personal and cultural crises. The poet, best known for his rustic works, considers the minor goddess Dione (within the context of a line of iambic pentameter, pronounced as die-ON-ney), the Emperor Charlemagne, Alcuin of York and his concept of the Memento Mori, God, the Paladins (the 12 champions of Christendom), Roland, Olivier, the Battle of Roncesvalles, and the brevity of life:

There is a limit to our time extension.
We are all doomed to broken off careers,
And so’s the nation, so’s the total race.
The earth itself is liable to the fate
Of meaninglessly being broken off.

In conclusion, the speaker – or Mr. Frost – says to Alcuin:

I hold your doctrine of Memento Mori.
And were an epitaph to be my story
I’d have a short one ready for my own.
I would have written of me on my stone:
I had a lover’s quarrel with the world.

In one of his last speeches, President Kennedy, who survived Mr. Frost by less than a year, said at the groundbreaking of the Robert Frost Library,

“In [a] free society art is not a weapon, and it does not belong to the spheres of polemics and ideology. Artists are not engineers of the soul. It may be different elsewhere. But in a democratic society the highest duty of the writer, the composer, the artist, is to remain true to himself…”  (https://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2013/08/the-purpose-of-poetry/309470/).

And truth sometimes leads to a lover’s quarrel with the world.

-30-


Note: I have no connection with the Library of America. If I did, I'd recommend you buy their excellent volumes new, but since I don't, I recommend that you find them used via the InterGossip, garage sales, and, I regret to say, library sales. The sharp-eyed reader will note that I covered the name of a public library in order to save some assistant librarian embarrassment for selling for a dollar or so a cultural treasure, and some other assistant librarian's ignorance in labelling (via computer code, for he or she obeyed the mindless chant of LEARN. TO. CODE.) the book as a reference work instead of as an anthology of poetry.

A Blurry MePhone High School Graduation via MyFaceSpaceBookeo - poem (of a sort)

Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

A Blurry MePhone High School Graduation via MyFaceSpaceBookeo

Prayer mumble WOOOO! Mumble pledge mumble WOOWOO! we WOO! are mumble TRANSMISSION INTERRUPTED WOOOOOOOOOOOO! Mumble here mumble WOOHOO! tonight STATIC [COWBELL] to WOOOO! honor WOO! the [AIRHORN] mumble of 2020. WOOOOOOOOOOOO! This TRANMISSION INTERRUPTED mumble isn’t [COWBELL SOLO] mumble mumble WOO! the ceremony [AIRHORN] we were all mumbling forward to ten mumble months ago WOOOOOOOOOOOO! valedictorian WOOWOOOOO! Salutatorian TRANSMISSION INTERRUPTED YOU GO GIRL! WOOOOOO! We’ll always remember mumble TRANSMISSION INTERRUPTED as I mumble call your names STATIC [COWBELL SOLO] benediction WHOHOOOOO! Jesus [AIRHORN] class mumble song [AIRHORN] WOOWOO! WOO! WOOOOOOOOOOOO! WOOHOO! WHOHOOOOO! [COWBELL] [AIRHORN] mumble school song mumble WOOWOO! WOO! WOOOOOOOOOOOO! WOOHOO! WOOWOOOOO!

Wednesday, June 3, 2020

Locked and Loaded in a Max Mara Tote - poem

Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot

Locked and Loaded in a Max Mara Tote

They say it began with a counterfeit bill
Printed by someone who knew how to code
And passed around until it was exchanged
Printed material for a human life

The Good is not much in demand these days
Nor yet the Beautiful, nor yet the True
A Bible locked and loaded in a Max Mara™ tote
Accessorizing a Potemkin street

They say it began with a counterfeit bill
But what among us isn’t counterfeit now?

Tuesday, June 2, 2020

The Governor Declares us to be a Disaster Area - poem

Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

The Governor Declares us to be a Disaster Area

The appropriately backlit headline read:

Texas Gov Declares State 'Disaster Area' Over Protests

I clicked the tab, and the next page read:

An unexpected error has occurred.

Which seemed right enough, so I left it at that

Monday, June 1, 2020

Summer of the Blue Helmets - poem

Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

Summer of the Blue Helmets

But our helmets were green, with ragged covers
Our training was still pretty much John Wayne
Our gear was mostly made in ‘42
Except for the M14 – that was new

Sergeant Schneider barked at us, his young heroes
And made us crawl the beach at Oceanside
And tho’ he made each day’s harsh training sting
One evening at Mass we heard sweet children sing:

“O Mary, Star, Star of the Sea
Pray for all children, pray for me”

Notes:

The last two lines are as I remember them from long-ago at Mary Star of the Sea Church in Oceanside, California while I was in Field Medical Service School at Camp Pendleton. I don’t know if the song my friends and I heard is a traditional hymn or if it is an arrangement by the teacher or choir director for the children’s choir. It was wonderfully beautiful, and I remember it with joy.

The blue helmets allude to riot helmets in the summer of 1968. Why blue? Was that thought to be a soothing color?

“…each day’s harsh training…” – sometimes all day and all night too.

Sunday, May 31, 2020

Pentecost and Drifting Smoke - poem

Lawrence Hall
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poeticdrivel.blogspot.com


Pentecost and Drifting Smoke

I will not leave you orphans

-John 14:18

A mighty wind has passed, an ashen wind
It was not the Wind we were waiting for
Nor yet again Holy Wisdom’s tongues of fire
But only Babel’s burning ziggurat

Since still we speak in many languages
And not the language of the Son of God
We pray for next year in Jerusalem
And fail to see that it is here, and now

For when our brothers prayed for life and breath
Our silence gave them only tears and death

Saturday, May 30, 2020

Protest, Defiance, or Maybe a Prayer - photograph by Julio Cortez, AP, via The Atlantic



Protest, Defiance, or Maybe a Prayer - poem

Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

Protest, Defiance, or Maybe a Prayer

“I have died, but you are still among the living”

-Boris Pasternak, “Wind”

A dancing man is silhouetted there
Against the light of a burning liquor store
Waving an upside down flag against the light
And a bottle – perhaps against the night

A marching man is silhouetted there
Against the flames of discount anesthetics
Cheap smokes and tokes and lottery-ticket lies
Skin magazines - but from the street wild cries

A desperate man is silhouetted there
Protest, defiance, or maybe – a prayer

Friday, May 29, 2020

"No Mass till [sic] Futher [sic] Notice" - MePhone photograph


No masses
No CCD (=Sunday school)
No Lenten liturgies
No stations of the cross
No Easter liturgies
No first communion
No confirmation
No graduation mass
No coffee hour

But still, as Maw Joad says in The Grapes of Wrath, "But we keep a'comin'. We're the people that live. They can't wipe us out; they can't lick us. We'll go on forever, Pa, 'cause we're the people."

The Class of 2020 Has Met Adulthood Already - weekly column

Lawrence (Mack) Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

[The several misspellings of “there” in the third line are deliberate; please do not change.]

The Class of 2020 Has Met Adulthood Already

Some high school graduates are in the top ten per cent of their class, and that’s good enough for them, but I was in the top eighty percent of my class, and eighty is a higher number than ten, so their. Or they’re. Or something.

Ranking as highly as I did I wasn’t able to see much of my commencement program because I was ‘way back somewhere in the middle, a glorious mediocrity whose personal academic achievements were recognized by my teachers for twelve years; they even took the trouble to write them out on my report cards: “Mack needs to try harder,” “Mack needs to pay attention in class,” and “Mack needs to do his homework.”

For this year’s graduating class, everyone, regardless of ranking, will be more visible – either spaced six feet apart on the football field or in a parking lot, or right up front a few inches away from a glowing screen. If senior tosses his (the pronoun is gender-neutral) cap it’s likely to take out a living-room light bulb.

There is no point in old sourpusses snorting that high school graduation is not important; it is to those involved. It is a secular liturgy, a rite of passage from childhood or to adulthood (although many of those elected to high national office seem to have flunked adulthood). Graduation might not be a big deal to the old grumpies twitting on their MePhones, but then graduation not about them. Graduation is a big deal for every eighteen-year-old, and it is a marvel to see how every school board (whom we elected, remember) has supported administrators, teachers, and parents (the ones who work, not the ones who complain on the InterGossip) in making sure that, come (Newark, New Jersey) or high water, the kids are going to have a graduation this year.

Inside ceremonies are forbidden because of The Virus That Must Not Be Named, and outside ceremonies here on the same latitude as Calcutta will be subject to heat, humidity, mosquitoes, and thunderstorms, but, still, sorta being sorta together will be sorta nice.

Antisocial distancing via computer wouldn’t be as much fun, but it would be air-conditioned and dry and mosquito-free, and if the guest speaker, the salutatorian, and the valedictorian rattle on too long about metaphorical keys that unlock metaphorical doors to metaphorical whatevers the graduate can discreetly peek at another channel.

I long to see a graduation ceremony in which the two graduates with the lowest GPAs get to give speeches too. That would be something to hear.

As with every graduating class, each former student will wake up on the next Monday morning to realize that he or she is no longer a senior but rather just another unemployed American who needs to look for a job. This year’s graduating class is different from any since the 1930s because on their first Monday morning of adulthood they will wake up to a national unemployment rate of around 15% (https://unemploymentdata.com/charts/current-unemployment-rate-chart/).

As adjusted for reality, you are 100% unemployed if you don’t have a job.

Beginning a career this year is going to require a little hustle (as a coach would say), but, yes, the no-longer-kids are going to be fine.

And the old grumpies should remember that this year’s high school graduates will in ten years be our doctors, cops, firefighters, nurses, dentists, soldiers, high-rise builders, teachers, oil drillers, bankers, entrepreneurs, attorneys, moms, and dads.

By then, of course, the class of 2020 will be complaining about the impertinence of the class of 2030 and the class of 2030 will be complaining about those old people who graduated in 2020 and need to get out of the way.

Life goes on, and it is (mostly) good.

Happy graduation!

-30-


Thursday, May 28, 2020

"Something Went Wrong" - poem

Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

“Something Went Wrong”

Something went wrong an error occurred
While loading this page try refreshing this page
Or navigate back to the front page -
Maybe it’s just a metaphor for life

Wednesday, May 27, 2020

Signals from the Stars, or Maybe from Gilligan's Island - MePhone photograph


The Most Judgmental Man You will Encounter today - poem

Lawrence Hall
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poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

The Most Judgmental Man You will Encounter Today

The most judgmental man in the world
Is not the thundering pagan augur
Nor yet the it’s-my-sidewalk yuppie jogger
Nor yet again the Madison Avenue flogger

Because we have learned

Hell hath no fury like a Catholic ‘blogger

Tuesday, May 26, 2020

Squirrel with Attitude - MePhone photograph

But WHY is She Coming 'Round the Mountain? - poem

Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

But Why is She Coming ‘Round the Mountain?

As children we sang about an unknown she
Never really questioning who she was
Or why should she come around a mountain
Especially since we had no mountain at all

And now about those six white horses, huh:
Did she steal them? Did they pull her stagecoach?
I didn’t want to go out and meet her
Especially if she was wearing pajamas

Childhood is a series of mysteries
The teacher took my Sergeant Preston pen

Monday, May 25, 2020

Bad Morning, Viet-Nam - poem

Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

Bad Morning, Viet-Nam

No music calls a teenager to war;
There is no American Bandstand of death,
No bugles sound a glorious John Wayne charge
For corpses floating down the Vam Co Tay

No rockin’ sounds for all the bodies bagged
No “Gerry Owen” to accompany
Obscene screams in the hot, rain-rotting night.
Bullets do not whiz. Mortars do not crump.

There is no rattle of musketry.
The racket and the horror are concussive.
Men – boys, really – do not choose to die,
“Willingly sacrifice their lives,” that lie

They just writhe in blood, on a gunboat deck
Painted to Navy specifications.


from The Road to Magdalena, 2012

Sunday, May 24, 2020

Coloring Inside the Lines - Poem and a MePhone Photograph


Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com


Coloring Inside the Lines














Sometimes it’s okay
To color inside the lines
That, too, is freedom






Saturday, May 23, 2020

Victory for the Slain, by Hugh Lofting - a brief review



Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

Today I finished a first reading of Hugh Lofting’s Victory for the Slain only hours after receiving it in the mail. This is one of the best things I have ever read, and I am going to begin re-reading it tonight, slowly and carefully, savoring each line and each cultural and historical allusion.

Mr. Lofting, famous for the Doctor Doolittle stories for children, was wounded in body and heart in the First World War, and in 1942 wrote this deeply-felt and deeply-thought poem as a rebuke to the keyboard commandos who are in every generation so eager to sacrifice the lives of young men and women (not their own children, of course; they are sent to serve bravely in law school). As a Viet-Nam veteran I “amen” almost every line.

Mr. Lofting’s Catholic upbringing and solid education are obvious; Victory for the Slain is a work built upon a life of faith, study, thought, prayer, and bloody experience. It is a message poem, all right, but a brilliant and disciplined one. One reads the tired old weak defense of a poor piece of work with, “But it’s from the heart” – well, this poem is from the heart, right enough, but it is also from the head and from the careful consideration of the thousands of years of civilization.

Walmer is a small press (but not literally a press; the book was printed in the USA) in Shetland (http://michaelwalmer.com/index.html). They have taken this neglected poem and printed it on beautiful, cream-colored paper in a beautiful, accessible typeface.

Victory for the Slain is a keeper.

Immigration Policies along Beer Can Road - poem

Lawrence Hall
mhall46184@aol.com
poeticdrivel.blogspot.com

Immigration Policies along Beer Can Road

Tejas y Libertad Para Siempre

There where the road bends, refugee Californians
are shooting at targets in their back field
At the other end of the road refugee Mexicans
Are plowing with the tractor they can now afford

Tejas y Libertad Para Siempre

Refugee New Yorkers are learning the joys
Of racing four-wheelers up and down
Past where this refugee from a day’s work
Clings to his Wordsworth and a glass of Scotch

Tejas y Libertad Para Siempre

Welcome to Texas
It’s a little crazy here, and we love it

Tejas y Libertad Para Siempre!