Sunday, September 6, 2026

Blue Storm - a modest attempt at haiku

  

Lawrence Hall

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Blue Storm

 

Blue September storm

Blowing down from the northeast

Hastening summer’s end

3 comments:

MC Onbeat said...
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MC Onbeat said...

The Macbeth epigraph is doing real work here, not just decoration. 'False-robed Sharpie-man' seismographing his name across seas and lakes is a properly venomous image, and the tetrameter keeps it bouncing where free verse would have let it sag.

Lawrence Hall, HSG said...

Thank you for your thoughtful words!